stony beach

A brief definition of a beach, by me –

Soft & golden sand with a fresh breeze & the sea

Yet, this shore, right here, without one grain of sand

Is believed to be qualified. I believe, but not quite…

Well… Sea? Checked. Breeze? Checked.

But then.., stones – and sooo haaard!

…..

In my mind, there’s a memory of a soft & smooth beach

Without the soft sand, my bare feet feel so… eek!

.. 

Rocks are surely great for the ‘mountain time’

Yet, each beach, in my mind, requires… the sand…

Second thought – let’s revise

It’s a fruitful land…

As in spite of my hurting feet

Which from pebbles bleed

 I prefer to keep swimming

In the sea bottomed hard

Than to drown in the one

Underlaid with soft sand.

.

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Final thought:

“Just keep swimming” Dori from “Finding Nemo”

2 responses to “Keep Swimming – Poem”

  1. Ragazza Triste Avatar

    This is certainly a good read. Very brave, eye opener and inspiring. Your honesty resonates in every word. Truly amazing piece of work. I hope you could also try to follow my Blog Page. Cheers! 🙂

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  2. Monika Ribeiro (writer/poet) Avatar
    Monika Ribeiro (writer/poet)

    Hi Ragazza Triste, thank you for the comment. I’ve just read your introduction and some of your works. Very interesting… I’ll keep an eye out for your posts gladly. Thanks for stopping by! 🙂

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